Scar me

by mier   Oct 28, 2005


Burn bleed,
scar me.
Sloth greed,
kill me.

I drown in my blood,
you're a permanent scar.
I stole your gut,
to fight my war.

Chains around my wings,
tight and strong.
Wires around my neck clings,
like a haunting song.

Benign smiling deadly,
the moon closed it's eyes.
Torment killing slowly,
my tears burn and dies.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Imagery is superb in this poem and I like it, it has great flow and you describe emotions powerfully. This piece has some amazingly effective lines, very creative poem. Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Creepy//kEWl totally transcendant ; well written sounds kinda like SLAYER though {its a band} check them out you might like what you hear
    ~HazE

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    That's good...I love it...hmm...the feelings you have...is it gone? Hope it is...and hey...you are a singaporean ha? Well...I'm a Malaysian...if you need to talk...this is my address...jane_fairies@hotmail.com

  • 19 years ago

    by Fig

    WOOOOW!!!!! this is such a truely amazing song! its really diffeerent too, you havent just used all the cliche typical ideas and discriptions, this is really unique and amazing!

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