WOOOOW!!!!! this is such a truely amazing song! its really diffeerent too, you havent just used all the cliche typical ideas and discriptions, this is really unique and amazing!

That's good...I love it...hmm...the feelings you have...is it gone? Hope it is...and hey...you are a singaporean ha? Well...I'm a Malaysian...if you need to talk...this is my address...jane_fairies@hotmail.com

Creepy//kEWl totally transcendant ; well written sounds kinda like SLAYER though {its a band} check them out you might like what you hear
~HazE

Imagery is superb in this poem and I like it, it has great flow and you describe emotions powerfully. This piece has some amazingly effective lines, very creative poem. Well done!