The Fun in Dying Young

by Darien   Oct 28, 2005


The Fun in Dying Young

On the ground where I lay,
choking on words you'd never say.
I want to hear you wishing me away,
So I could end my stupid life today.

You mumble those words I dread,
because I know you want me dead.
I'm tired of this life that I've led,
Just take a bullet straight to my head.

Let me lie here in this agonizing pain,
for I have nothing left here to gain.
Wipe the wall of my blood stain,
pretend things will get better again.

My wrist would let the blood spill,
as I hold this blade against my will.
I know I was your favourite kill,
my death gave you the biggest thrill.

And right where I lie,
I turn to see you cry.
Your fun will soon die,
Once I close my eyes.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    That was sad!! But good, And I noticed each last word in the stanza's rhymed, which worked out pretty well, They didn't seem too forced. So that was good! 5/5

    `Taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    Wow, I really like your poems, they're very dark, but well written so it's not sick, just very twisted! :)
    Luv Helen xxx

  • Wow...really no words for this one. its brilliant. great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow, this is so sad, it almost made me cry. i love poems that do that. you are DEFINITLY on my favorites now!!!
    **lisa**

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    Wow. very deep. great rhyming.
    vanessa
    xoxoxo