by Darien Oct 28, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The Fun in Dying Young |
by Natalie
That was sad!! But good, And I noticed each last word in the stanza's rhymed, which worked out pretty well, They didn't seem too forced. So that was good! 5/5 |
Wow, I really like your poems, they're very dark, but well written so it's not sick, just very twisted! :) |
Wow...really no words for this one. its brilliant. great job! |
Wow, this is so sad, it almost made me cry. i love poems that do that. you are DEFINITLY on my favorites now!!! |
by Vanessa Lea
Wow. very deep. great rhyming. |