Really liked dis hun xxxx

Noo, it made me cry. I love it, this one and your other ones I commented on are, my favorites from any I have ever read on this site. Your poems have so so much meaning. I bet loads of people can relate. I know I can. I can see all this stuff happening in my mind. It's amazing. Your a great poet.

Wow! this is great...I am spechless, which never happens to me. I will add u too my fav. I love your writting ... check me out! I think you'd like my writting!

XOXO
kayla

Terrific writing.

Xxx..

Great poem. Depressing, dark and emotional. I loved it.

Take care.

Great poem, a bit depressing but fantastic! i really like it, off to read more of your work
luv courtie

Im guessing your confronting... death? thats very interesting. like it a lot. 5/5 (im so sorry if its true)

I gave it a 5. i thought this was an amazing way to show your feelings. nice job

This poem is also excellent, it seems as though you like to write of murder...very much. Lucky, I find it very thrilling. =)

The only this that confuses me is, who is killing how.

Is it your beloved, or a random stranger?

Oi.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

That wa svery well written, you managed to keep the rhyme consistent throughout each stanza very well, which is a hard task to complete! And it just seemed to build up so well and concludes perfectly. i really liked this poem. I loved the second last stanza!

This poem is excellent, it seems as though you like to write about murder. great poem x x x

It's a great poem. Very touching and sad.

Wow. very deep. great rhyming.
vanessa
xoxoxo

Wow, this is so sad, it almost made me cry. i love poems that do that. you are DEFINITLY on my favorites now!!!
**lisa**

Wow...really no words for this one. its brilliant. great job!

Wow, I really like your poems, they're very dark, but well written so it's not sick, just very twisted! :)
Luv Helen xxx

That was sad!! But good, And I noticed each last word in the stanza's rhymed, which worked out pretty well, They didn't seem too forced. So that was good! 5/5

`Taleee xx