Intertwined

by Dreaming_Awake   Oct 28, 2005


This is not so much of a poems as a song but it did start out as one so well here goes

Fate, love, and deception is in their eyes
Two different lives are intertwined
She is patient, kind, and caring
He is genital, calm, and over bearing
Deep secrets they will hold to true
Their vow of friendship they wont renew

Tears in your eyes are tellin me
Something different from all those lies
You say you dont wanna hear me
You say you dont wanna see me
All you seem to say is go away
Deception is your one true friend
You tear my heart again and again

Theyll come together till the end
When their childs life begins
Shell love them both with all her heart
Hell care fore them from the start
Shell give her life for them to live
His childs life hell never give

Tears in your eyes are tellin me
Something different from all those lies
You say you dont wanna hear me
You say you dont wanna see me
All you seem to say is go away
Deception is your one true friend
You tear my heart again and again

Theyll be together till the end
Then his childs life must begin

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  • 19 years ago

    by Pilar

    I loved this poem, it flowed so well

    overflowed with feelings, it kept me reading till the end =)

    pili

  • 19 years ago

    by Areyoucrazy

    Dustin , gosh i loved that poem so much , I love how you wrote it these words well put together . Thanks for the comment on my poems , and keep up your poem writting , i think your a great wirtter .
    ~April~

  • 19 years ago

    by Whitney

    I like this poem Dustin! You say I put my feelin behind my poems well so do you!! GOOD JOB!

  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Now if i ever hear you say your poems are crap i would hit you even tho i really cant.. lol wow man boy your amazing i am really glad i came to your site. and trust me theres any heartbroken people out there your not alone.. and thanks for caring ands that goes for you you need to talk feel free to email me any time.. i love to get to know ya. hope things get better 5.5

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