Touching poem james.i like it so much the line that u used.(to promise that you and i would never part then why iam here alone with broken heart in hand i though you really loved me and cared) u know james it's directly touching my heart coz that line once i used to say.:) Take care.Thanks also for ur wonderful thougths u've said to ur comment in my last poem that i posted.

Aww, thats really sweet...5/5

Beautiful dude for real,i loved it, you can really feel the emotion coming off the words great work, keep it up, be strong aite bro

Nick

Wow i really like this poem it was awsome.keep up the good work.