So sad......even though you need to finish the story since its 3 parts long. Good poem and hope to read the other parts

OMG! I cant wait for to read the second one. You have such a way of drawing your reader in!

Well, I'm waiting to see what the next part will be! I wanna know what's in the letter, lol.

Anyways.
I felt the poem was a little forced at times, particularly at the start. I also felt it was a little dull at the start.
However. As by the end you had me wanting to read more, that is indeed a good sign. I've given a 4 to this poem. Nice work, can't wait for the rest.

What the...I'm confused by your last line...this poem is written by you right?
Okey..don't bother about the last line since I don't understand it...I think this poem really shows how much you love someone...and it's very sad to leave that way...and why will this be the last poem you wrote...when it's part one...please do not tell me that part two is your death letter...and you won't be posting it...whatever it is...hit me back...

Good poem you need to put the other parts so i can know what the letter said

Nice poem good for your lst one but one thing to say to you is Jacklin in mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
J/K lol

Deadly poem cant wait for part two

Robert, wow..that was intense. I cant wait to read part two in like a minute. You should really consider writting a poetry book with your works of art.

Love always,
Jennifer. *kiss*

Wow awesoem poem..gonna go read part 2:P
xoxo

Another very unique poem!!! i love your rhymes! you write poems so wonderfully.this poem deserves a 5/5 for sure!!

Awesome!! i love all of ur poems and im going to go read pt.s 2 and 3.