Great poem! what did u mean make the sentences so there not jagged? i dont undertsand what u ment bout my poem "everlasting"

THis poem is rly rly good!...I love it...You are a great writer, keep writting!

Its a great poem in a way it kind of reminds me of my ex,but n-e-wayz
it was good

Beautiful...

Ok, this comment is for John Anthony....first off, thanks for the nice comments about my work....I'd be happy to talk to you about anything you wanna know, but do you have some type of e-mail or something instead of just the site? just curious....newayz, don't be a stranger, write back soon......thnks again, talk to you later......bye