by Anthony Oct 28, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
What if I said I love you? |
ASTOUNDING!!!! |
Wow excellent use of words! this was an all around fabulous poem. gr8 work! i am adding u 2 my favorites! |
by Princess09
Aww this si sooo cute. your like turned it around n it still made sence good one!! |
by Torn
Wow that was awesome...so sweet and i loved the repitition of it.. |
2 things, first off i dont think you need "red" in line 4 of stanza 1 "would your heart turn black" rolls off the tongue easier. |