These Days

by Joey Matthews   Oct 29, 2005


These days roll by
Making every moment
Place certain images
In the front of my mind
Disconnected
From the things that I do
Reflecting
Only on that call
When I first saw your face

The blood in my body
Rushed making me feel
My pulse

The softness in your voice
Filled my life
With this feeling of new

I slowly floated
On my own little cloud
Watching the world
From above

I saw my life start
To shine
My beautiful angel
Are you really mine?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is a very sweet and sincere piece, I really liked the ending, sorta like you are questioning whether everything is real because it is so good. Well done :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Leona

    WOW great job 5/5 and i dont even like love poems but this one is good.
    Leona

  • 19 years ago

    by morbid_tears

    Aww, thats a really sweet poem. I really like it!! Thanx for reading my poem, that did upset me when that person rated it a 1 cuz I thought that was one of my best poems that I have ever written, but everyone has their own opinion. Love the poem!!! 5/5
    ~*Amber*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Becky

    I love the way your words your poems its very different from toehr peopels yet similar i dunno its cool like the way that it isnt a whole though for a few lines but yet i understand it all right away lol i dunno i think your prolly confused by what i just said lol keep it up 5/5

    lots of love
    ☼Becky☼

  • 19 years ago

    by Lithium

    Awww thats sweet i understand what ur saying great work xox rc