I loved the wording you used. awsome write 5/5

Wow gr8 poem. gr8 rhythm and rhyme scheme. keep up the gr8 work.
~me~

You had me fromt he first line...your vocab is soooooo powerful, sadness being symbolized by the rain is very cliche but i think you won lol, this is the best poem about this subject i have read ever great job 5/5

An amazing poem, the imagery is flawless and theres such a depth of emotion there. I hope you submit some more poems, I'd love to read more xxxx