Awesome Poem! It sounds like its coming from my mouth! That is is exactly what happend to me about a month ago! My "best friend" told me she didn't want to be my friend n e more and she started saying rumors about me and all of this...I can relate to this a lot! Good job, keep up the good work!! Lots of Love -Aubrey

Heyy . just wanted to comment on this . and y'know that line `You were never true` - of course your `ex-buddy` was true. or else you guys would have never been friends. anyway i also wanted to say that i know how it feels to lose a friend. it's hard. but things like this happen in life. and we all gotta move on.. rightt? but it's hard.. reall hard..aint it?

Umm I said you were never true cuz she always lied to me.....so don't tell me she was true cuz you didn't even know her!

Omg i loved it that was so good...thanks for commenting mine...Keep it up!

They just keep on getting better.

One of your best. one again the rhyming pattern was a bit scatterd, but i really liked this one. well done

Ruby

I wont b suprised if i hear that u r famous 4 ur poems sumday. u have a gr8 gift, plz make sure 2 use it. 5/5!
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You really cared about this person, you write a lot about them, sorry bout the whole deal losing friends is hard ecspecially best friends but it makes you stronger im sure. the flow was good sometimes you got off your rhyming pattern but i think you could call this just free verse so it's alright great poem 5/5