Comments : Last thoughts.

  • 19 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Steve,

    This is very deep. I can fully understand the sorrow and the love all in the same emotion. Quite an empowering poem in relation to life, love and departure!

    SiE

  • 19 years ago

    by Anthony

    Wow this was a strong poem. The best lines to me were
    He asked if I was at peace with God and if I was prepared for the worst.
    He prayed for me and hoped that I had the strength and will to survive.
    I was prepared, prepared to die.

    Awesome job 5/5 ^_^

    ~Anthony

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Steven,
    Very touching piece my friend, and God just wasn't ready for you right yet. Brought tears to my eyes...

    Love Ann