Comments : Modern Society (September 11)

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow...that was an amazing poem:P!!
    really kept me on the edge of my seat.
    So true...you're great for writing this.
    Take care xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I'm breathless...this poem is so honest and true...when I read it...it feels as though I'm the girl...the fear, the anxiety...I can feel it in me...really good...you really capture the readers heart with this poem...

  • 18 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    I Luved Your Poem A Lot! It So Rox! Accually I Like All Your Poems About Life!

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    THiS iS A-M-A-Z-i-N-G! POEMS DON`T GET MUCH BETTER THAN THAT! GREAT JOB;; REALLY!

    -SHELBY-

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow. I cried.
    I've never been able to find the words to write about this, though I've wanted to many times.
    I must say this is an outstanding poem. I hesitated to read it, because of the title. I knew what it would be about.
    Anyway, Eh.
    You did a great job, I loved it.
    Oh, I've noticed with the poems of yours I read, You don't have stanzas.
    In short poems ..They seem to flow better without stanzas, but in long ones it's better to put them in stanzas so it's easier to obsorb. ( s p )

    5/5 Fo Sho.