I really like it a lot. isnt much i can say. but i want to thank you for commenting on mine. it means a lot!
bree

This poem is rich in ideas but it could flow a bit better in places. even so I enjoyed reading it and think it's a good poem.

Wow! that was really good! geez. u have a gr8 gift and i hope u use it! 5/5 again!
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