I agree, sad poem. I hope you ok too. I know you are...you have GAVIN! I Will ALWAYS be here no matter what! LYLAS!!!! much love! bye!
Sandra

Very sad.

extremely well written

I liked this a lot, the story line was the best part and the flow was good but you never kept your rhyme scheme steady at all and sometimes you didn't even bother to rhyme, but other then that i loved the words you used and the way you worded everything good job

This is so sad, but i understand what u r goin through if u ever wanna talk i have aim my screen name is drmissylynn02 hit me up.

Wow that is oo sad. But I love it.

Really sad :( but its a great poem :)

Omg ur a gr8 writer it was realy sad

This is quite a complicated poem, so much happens in this one poem. I liked how you set the weather to rain as you where crying in the poem. Fifth stanza third line, you talk about this comparison however, the line is very long and could do with shortening. The second stanza, third line, you have a spelling mistake, "lieing" should be "lying." Good job though, keep it up.