Awww, awesome poem. I know how you feel. Someone just crushed my heart.

That was a great poem. it made me sad. any poem that makes u feel an emotions is a great poem.

Really nice, great choice of words, it flows well.
5/5
Well done, i liked it alot.

xxx cici xxx

Very beautiful. Well put together. The only thing that I didnt like personally was when you had the 5 and 6 line stanzas it kind of throws it out of whack, but thats just a personal note I may read it diffrently than others.

It was a nice poem either way, there was a lot of emotion and feeling in it. Hope to be able to read more from you.

At first when u changed the stanza length i found it frustratin, and im not hope u did it on purpose cause it now it was a cop out. I gonna say u did it on purpose cause ur a good writin ,in which cause, it worked well for the emphasis...keep up the good work, and ill be sure to read more of ur works. thankx for the comment

You can move on. Part of your heart may be stolen, but you have plenty left to give. ;)

"I just want him to say, why he left me this way
Without a single word of goodbye
His truthful words would of caused hurt feelings
But his silence hurts more than a lie. "

*his truthful words would HAVE caused...

Lovely work.

xxx

Hey it is me i love your poem its perfect read mine again i fixed it for you ok bye
sherida gottuso

That was really good... im sry that u r in pain, & i know how it is sumtimes... i just got out of that, but thankfully my baby is bak... and things are going to b better this time... and i hope the same will happen with u..

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This is an awesome poem! i can totally relate to this. this is a very well written poem! i wish i could write a poem as good as this..your very talented!

Wow i really can relate 2 this poem...i luvd it.....wunderful work...5/5!

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Beautiful, Creative, Wonderfull...there arent enough words in the world to describe this poem. Great job!