Flame of Faith (Haiku)

by Daniel J   Oct 30, 2005


The flame of faith; though
Fragile be; Shall last the haze,
Of eternity.
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Haiku:
A type of poem that consists of three lines. The first line should have five syllables. The next one- seven syllables. Then the last line should have five again.

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  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Very nicely done. Haiku are especially difficult to pull off but you managed well.
    BTW Haiku are traditionally used to describe nature hence the limited scope.

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    Brillient made me think!!
    aaron

  • 19 years ago

    by Daniel J

    Krete, you\'re spot on! :p
    Well done! :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Bravo. :] Well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    Nice Haiku - I totally agree - The Flame of Faith will forever last the cover of eternity.

    I'm not sure your intent of haze, but I take it more as a cover, than a myriad expression. Like a "Hazy" presence, one in which embellishes and covets.

    Sort of like the idea that Satan would'nt want the "Words" of God to be manifest in the world.

    So candidly, and in short - This Flame will outlast the haze which is eternity.

    I'm probably wrong, but either way I enjoyed it.

    Keep writing!

    5/5

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