by Jamie Oct 30, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The room is drowned in smoke |
by Ele
I loved this poem. you linked it to poker amazingly and use so many great terms so well. great poem, well done! |
Wow...this is a different poem that shows love and i have to say that i really and truly loved it...5/5 on this peace...great job is all i have to say |
by SSSAAMMMYY
Great job! This poem is really amazing. I love your style of poetry it is very meaningful! |
by x-Beth-x
- Yet again awesome poem. I loved it. I like how you showed love thru the poker game. Rock on! - |
by Natalie84
Whoa! Excellent write! Alot of people have been writing like this lately...comparing objects and games to love. I think this is the best I've read yet. I love how it's a bit nerve racking until the end...where you end so sweet. |