WOW! this poem was just full of Symbolism! HECK! The whole darn thing was one big sybol! I loved it! And I agree, sometimes love is just like a game of poker! My favorite lines were
"It's drawing to an end
You're getting close to call
As we play it out heads up
I can see you're scared to fall"

Thank you for the great comments you left. Atomic told me that you are brutaly honest so I felt honored to have recieved great ratings. I look forward to reading more of your work!

~Anthony

Wow that was awesome..really loved that. I have no idea how you can write such amazing poems but hey i'm not complaining!
keep writing babe
xoxox

Wow this is completely awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it. xox

an yea witch hunt poems are fun. and yay that u like jack off jill as well ur probably the first person ive come across hu has herd of them!

Now this is something different.
What a novel idea! Well done!
5/5.

That was a beautiful metaphor of love. i've never seen it done like that. great poem.

Too good to be true....

Thanks for sharing.

Michelle

Whoa! Excellent write! Alot of people have been writing like this lately...comparing objects and games to love. I think this is the best I've read yet. I love how it's a bit nerve racking until the end...where you end so sweet.

- Yet again awesome poem. I loved it. I like how you showed love thru the poker game. Rock on! -

-♥-Anarchy-♥-

Great job! This poem is really amazing. I love your style of poetry it is very meaningful!
~Sammy

Wow...this is a different poem that shows love and i have to say that i really and truly loved it...5/5 on this peace...great job is all i have to say

I loved this poem. you linked it to poker amazingly and use so many great terms so well. great poem, well done!