by Dwain Dec 9, 2003
category :
Love, romance /
new love
He looked to the sky |
by jane
Very nice...good job...keep it up |
by Taylor
So creative and free. It's like an account of someone learning to love life again. Great words. Great flow. Great everything. Just Great. |
by Sarah Ann
Beautiful amazing poem. I loved the rhyming and the simple structure of the poem...Keep up your wonderful work!!! |
by Laura Ash
Great poem=] |
by Catie
i loved it!!!! its awesome. i lovesd ur choice of words with expressing how it all related to something. if u would comment on mine 2!! thx |