Don't be disgusted by yourself...you are my sweet little angel...you will always be...k...believe in yourself...don't pull yourself down...you are beautiful girl...trust me...I don't have to see you to say that...I just know it in my heart...luv ya hun...Jane |
by Tess
Darling, this piece is beautifully written but you I think it is about time you started using your talent to express the goodness you see in yourself. I know it is hard as I have been in your shoes many times before. Keep your head raised high and I will continue to pray for you! God bless, Tess xoxo |
by Jamie
I really liked this poem, this idea is real overused but i did like this, your vocab is good, the flow was perfect you never got off your rhyming once so good job. the last stanza was my favorite...now for the whole you shouldn't feel this way part of my comment lol, i know what this is like im feeling the same way right now i kinda feel hopeless and just like i dont like myself at all, but i think it gets better cause i think i've felt like this before and it did, so hang in there cause it'll get better hunny...take care sweetie! |
Omg hun this is amazing poem, wow i loved it wow, breath-taking I dont know what to say, i dont know why but p&q PM's dont work for me I dont recieve any of them sorry,I tried checking all my emails but it isnt there, hope you're doing ok, byee lubb you |
by JAY Poet
Oh my god this poem is amazing i loved it some times i feel the same!!! |
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You shouldnt be disgusted in yourself...your a beautiful person. brilliant poem hun xx |
by Stephy
You shouldnt be(utterly disgusted by yourself that is)try to see the beautiful side, everyone has one....stay strong-xxx- |
Another great poem, and such a familiar topic too. However this time I have something good to say, lol. You have a lot of friendship poems to those you care about and you are such an AMAZING FRIEND! You are so genuinely caring and loving to them especially when they need you. I know very few people who are like that, who have that gife, and you are one of them. Hun you are incredible, and so kind to others. There are qualities that everyone hates about themselves, I know there are times I can't bare to look in a mirror without wanting to smash it, and I am sure you have felt that too. But there are many great things about you, that outweight the things that you don't like. I know there might be a lot on the disliking list right now, but that's okay. Pick one or two to work on for now and set the other's aside. Start everyday trying to become the person you want to be. Good luck baby! Love ya! |