I have come to the conclusion that I can nolonger interpret your poems.....lol, I dont know why.
That one was great though.
Love you, xoxoxox

This is really good, and the flow is perfect. (I never feel as though my work flows right either, I guess we criticise our own work most). Thanks for your comment. You're definitely a favourite. I'll be commenting on more of your stuff for sure.

Another long one that holds its own, good job suz

Love this poem it flows very well too.

Finally I absolutely loved your other poems and this one im so sorry i couldnt comment
I love your poems so much
love
Em