I love ur poem. This gurl must b so lucky 2 have sum 1 lyk u. I'll b waitin for part 2. N could u pleez comment on sum of my poems it would mean alot.
-HUGS N KISSES!

Yeah...the girl is one lucky girl...ureally sweet...makes my heart melt...lol...beautifully wriiten...

But if you want ot make it better...maybe you should arange it more neatly...haha...just kidding...it's okey the way it is...

WOW.....I loved it....I wish i could write like that.....HEy Thanks for commenting on my poem..im actually not that young im 18 i wrote that when i was younger...im not new my most recent poems are under JOCLYN...check them out sometime..tell me if i have improved..Thanx Joclyn(jocey)

Much Love

Great poem
i rated it a 5/5 :P
keep it up

Wow what a wonderful poem that was really touched poem i mean it's just more then perfect keep it up man i love your poems.
Jammal

Ok sh1t this was beautiful!!! I was basically going "omg omg that is love'' it was just soooo heart wrenching. I loved it = D go u!!!!
luv jess xoxo

Wow thats a really great poem keep it up!!! :)

Very good loving poem.With a great flow.5/5

This is an emotionall poem! great job!

I loved this poem. That girl must be really lucky. Thsi poem was heart wrenching and I loved every word!!

~love~

Totally full of love and feeling and emotion!
Well done! Neil.