Wow, you learn summit new every day, lol. I've never heard of one of these before !!
Anyways apart from teaching me something new, i liked this, it was different with a good choice of words.
5/5
Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

Wow i never even herd of that before so thanks for that. the poem was extremely gd though! xox

I loved it....Daniel...Thanks agian for intoduceing me to a new form of poetry writing...Much Love...Joclyn

I really love your open teaching on these different ways to write. And I'm especially fond of what you write of. Autumn is such a beautiful time of the year - well at least where I live. But in the UK, England, my sister tells me it's always raining.

Oh well.

I loved the changes, the transitions are sweet and in harmony to your rictameter. The most enjoyful part of this piece is that you leave it open. I do so hope you write another to conlude, or keep open ended:

'...Look Now
Look Now..."

A Delight!

5/5

I can not think of a single other person who could write like that, it's amazing really.

I must say I miss reading new stuff from you, so you'd better post lots when you get back lol. Good luck on your studying!~
-Jaime

Very nicely done!

Regards,

Steve

Here where we live never gets white :(
everyday, I can feel the summer on my way coming back from school and well, it's a little too much. but well, that's how it's going to be till the end and we're used to it anyway :)
I liked the way you had written about all the seasons in just a few lines. that must have been hard to do.
take care,
Marjan