Comments : Forgive me please

  • 19 years ago

    by aaron c s

    That was a beautiful poem and most people cant come to the realization that u did. love is a great thing and i hope he comes back to u.

  • 19 years ago

    by HansRik

    I verily enjoyed this poem. It is wonderfully written with a consistent and coherent rhyme scheme. The feelings expressed throughout are real, and I appreciate that. This is a very well written poem. Well done!

  • 19 years ago

    by peach

    Real good poem, maybe you could comment on some of mine.

    xxhe will forgive youxx