Ummmm........im gonna be kinda mean so if u dont want to read something cynical then just stop reading. u were on an emotional rant about why are u not skinny like those models and such and then you wonder if they do have "the" perfect body. and then at the end u tell everybody to be proud of the body they have. so what im trying to say is that u dont sound like ur proud of the body u have so its kinda blunt if u tell other ppl to be proud of their body. im sorry if u didnt like my comment. i do have something nice to say though. it was very well written and showed a lot of thought.

I have to admit i agree with you. this poem is exellenct. good work there

Ruby