Good one, i like it a lot my fav part is "This is not a dream,
This is not a fantasy,
This is not an illusion.
I am trapped in reality.
Cold, heartless, dark, reality."
for not rhyming you did a great job!!

Usually i don't really like poems that don't rhyme... but this one is an exception. i really liked it, and i know what you're saying. it would be nice if it were all just a dream ey?
take care, xoxoxo

Excellent topic M'Dear!

There were some times when the formation was a bit off, but it was still an very god read.

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WOW! Great job! Keep up the great work! I loved reading your poetry. :o)

Michelle