Its great hun, lots of emotion and it has lots of meaning. I like it and keep up the great work I would like to see more of ur work on the site! Well great job again
Juls

Thanxz for you comment

Wow.. this is such a sad poem.. its soo emotional. it flowed nicely.. i can feel the pain and sadness in this poem.. it was very touching very good job =)

keep it up =)

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