I rated it 4, which got you up to 2.5.
I think it deserves more than that though.

I also think it could do with some structure. Although it's prose, it would have more effect on the reader, as well as reading a little smoother, if this was done.

Let's take your last stanza as an example:

All because of you, thats why my heart sings. Because of you is why I live, and beneath the cool waters edge my tears drain, flowing inside the depths of me.
Because now that the tears have subsided, i can finally see the me inside of me.
All because, of you.

Having the "because of you"s in a structured sort of way does leave an effect on the reader. Structure is half the poem. The other half is content, which you have written well.
Well done. Keep writing.

Hey girl dam good poem, thanks for commenting on mine.

always
*kelli

AWW THANXS YA'LL...LISSA XOX

Wow.. your poems effortlessly portray so much emotion and depth. it sounds like it was truly written from your heart, and not your head, which is what poetry is.. true emotions of the heart. and not mindless thoughts from the head...it was so beautiful and i enjoyed it, depsite the grammar mistakes!

That poem was beautiful! it deserves a 10! so much emotion. i loved it.

Awesome work hun...wow...u just keep making me go wow..each time i see ur poems...I really can't say much about all your poems...cause they r awesome...man...u r among the best...

Excellent Excellent Excellent..do i need to say more 5/5

Once again very good choice of words...I like it...