Interesting concepts there.
A nicely written bit of prose.

By the way, it's "lose" [as in, to misplace something] not loose [untighten] in "We lose our minds" [line 6].

I'm rating it 4.

This about different kinds of people but mainly loners and cutters. i hope it means sumthn to you cuz it does to me. Lissa xox

The 4 golden awards is to have

FPCD all in gold... you know what you have next your name thing..to have it all gold...you have the talent to do it
5/5

I think it would be more meaningful to more people if it wasnt specified directly to cutters and loners
But still great write i have nothing bad to say about it.