FOREVER GONE

by myshiningstar14   Oct 30, 2005


You were here, the days gone by like the moon on a winter's night. Here today, gone the next. And now I'm all alone, faded and broken. Want to mend our hearts, want to sew up the pain again.
Now I'm lost in the silence of words i cannot explain; and with no one to blame, I fear I've gone insane.
As i gather the pieces of my heart, and all the colors with-in, I get down on my hands and knees and pray, that you'll be here with me once again. But you're gone, forever gone; leaving me all alone in this world.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla Kay

    Awesome poem i loved everyhting about but i agree it should have been put into stanza's.BUT its still awesome

    XOkayla

  • 18 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is a great poem also good job but i think it should have been put into stanzas lol sry thats the only thing that bugged but ti was still awesome good job i think u did a awesome job :D

    keenan

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    My only suggestion for this..is to have it in stanza's some readers will just glance at it and leave because it seems like a story..just advice though 5/5 though
    great job

  • 19 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    This is about how you have sumone and then when you think they're gonna be there forever they tell you they cant do this anymore...and they walk away..*sigh* terriable i kno...bti i do so enjoy this poem. comment please. lissa xox

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