If you eat beans all year,
does the world smell like fart?
if you join a different cult,
will myspace tear out your heart?

with all that weight you gained,
will you get a wife?
if you decide to eat steak,
will you use a knife?

If a problem occurs,
will you visit Oprah?
If you're missing something,
just add a little okra.

do you own pirate ship?
so you can go anywhere?
and then spend days being a craphead
about the seasalt in your hair?

do you live in a town
or live in the city?
are you a calm person,
who happens to feel shitty?

Keep things in persective
think about your membrane.
becuz if you get in a bike wreck.
you go friggin' insane!

BWAHAHAHA! that was a TOTAL remake of your poem! u dont even know! that was soo fun!lol read ur poem again. and then read mine...and...ITS FUN!! lol chek out my new poem. its my answer sorta to you!! ~nancy

YES I KNOW!!!
specially when people are making YOU the subject of the drama. *growls*
but anyways, awesome poem. another 5/5 ^.^

Hey this is a really good poem. I like nancy's version of it lol. But i really need to talk to you about something, so call me when you get the chance ok? ttyl....

Yeah, that was really good. thanks for commenting on my other one. it makes me realize you dont totally hate me. but i agree, i hate drama.

Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!

Wow! that was great. i loved it. it was a very insightful piece of writing. it was full of depth, intelligence and creativity. i do wish it hadn't ended though, because i was enjoying it immensely. this poem held my full attention until the very end. i hope to read much more of your work in the future

Brad