That was very well written with a great flow and the wording was magnificent. my poem meant that my life was hard but i kept going at it but now that i dont care my life sux. it was better when i did care and i got more hurt.

Hey! it was good... but i just don't want you to get the wrong message, the poem i wrote wasn't directed to you. it was directed to.... well, somone else i don't much want to mention right now.