Wow that was powerful
very emotional

the last stanza was a nice way to end everything and the poem as a whole seemed to flow very well

good job

That was a very good poem but it was very sad i hope you forgive the person that you wrote this about

allalone

This is an incredible write. powerful. you portrayed a hatred so deep it's felt. i really like this.

That was really amazing. Simple yet powerful, and great quality. I enjoyed reading that, and many people can probably relate. Nice job.

Great poem i fekt like i could relate to that pure feeling of hatred but revenge isnt always right

This is the first poem that gave me chills! Amazing. And thank you so much for your votes and comments. They mean a lot to me. Having someone with your talent praising my work just encourages me so much more to write.