by Drew Gold Oct 30, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Can you feel the detachment |
by shadowlight
I liked this it's well written and has a good structure. there was also something abotu itt (not sure what) which made it different and unique. |
by Ariana
I'm not entirely sure what it's about, but I did like the direct approach this piece had. I also liked how your stanzas were long but did not seem to drag on at all. I think you should end with a question mark in the first stanza. |
I liked this... |
by Anthony
I loved this poem! It was unusual and off beat, and that is rare to find! My favorite lines were |