Hey sweetie why are you such depersed guy?..well every one gets liek that some times..i know i do..and thanks for the commet on the poem..*Kiss*
This poem i hink is deep and dark ..but yet still a very good ..keep writeing and keep well and if you ever need some one to talk to or just chat..hit me up..

My friend....this surely brought a tear to my eye...to be so young and feel this way toward life...I pray things get better for you and please know I'm one that cares....sending you a big hug....

Love Ann

Anthony ...
Sometimes the weight of the world on our shoulders is a burden that is hard to carry ...
one step forward two steps back .. but having friends that care for you and are willing to help carry that burden is in itself a beginning ...a begining to hope , healing and understanding ....
We are all here for you at CC&P and always willing to lend an ear or a shoulder ... sending you cyber Hugs and hope you feel better tomorrow ....for tomorrow is a new day ... ~ Hugs ~

Wow...this is really good...im sorry your feeling so much pain and i hope things get better for you...5/5 great job
Becky
xoxo

Oh my gosh... It must really suck actually feeling like that.. feeling like no one is there for you, and that you can't trust anyone anymore, because you've been hurt too much, or that your scared of taking the chance of expressing your true feelings because in the end your afraid you'll be rejected or pushed away and left on your own.. I can't exactly say I know how it feels, but I can say I'm not exactly always happy and surrounded with loved ones all the time either.. or just anyone, It really sucks to be lonely.. and most of the time I know what that feels like, It sucks to not be good enough for anyone, and feel at your lowest with no one there to push you up or help you through, but amazing poem, You just need to hang in there, like we all need to, and continue being the amazing poet you are, 5/5 and if you ever need a friend to talk to, i'm here.

Jess

My arms are open wide for you sweetie!

There were some exellent parts in the poem and I would like ot point them out for you.

"And your tears could fill a lake."

"It's in pieces too small to divide. "

Truly talented, aren't you?

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

That was soooo gd!written soooo well!filled with true emotions! i loved it sooo much!i love it coz i can totaly relate!stay strong!im here if u need sum1 2 talk 2!if u need sum1 to tell ur problems 2!it rally dos help!neways keep it up!u are truly talented! keep shining!always 5/5 ...josie....

This poem is probably the most outstanding ive ever read, its absoloutely breathtaking...actually bought a tear to my eye its full of so much emotion and sadness,just reading through this made me feel so much sorrow for you and all youve been through(even though i dont actually know,but it sounds like youve had a hard time)
it made me just wanna jump through the screen and give you a hug...keep writing and gettin all your feelings out like this as you have a exceptional talent.
i hope things look up for,
be safe
xx