First rictameter and the best I've ever read, considering this is the first I've ever read.... :)

First rictameter huh? Well it's the best I've ever read, considering it's the only one I've ever read.... ;)

I agree with Jeff. :) Excellent job.

Another delectible piece. Yeah I know, eating pieces is a tad odd, but I enjoy the irony of it all.

Like you said in the previous piece .. the notice of the change of seasons. Here I like the same thing. The transformation from the rusty human earth color brown -- to the almost errie redemption of "Cold" White Snow.

Cute.

5/5

I like the way it changes from autumn to winter. I might try one of these. excellent write!