Noice poem.

(Sorry its short)

Amy

This is fantastic, at least that's what i think. =D lots of emotions here. the yearning, the pain, the love, all is felt. it flows really well and i love it!

What a beautiful poem!
i can truly empathise
well done :D
~*MaRy*~

Oh my god u got me crying....this is soooo sweet and at the same time very sad...i love how u tell the audience how u feel and how he feels about you...5/5 keep up the great job

U r a beautiful writer...keep up the gr8 work....oh n thnx 4 replying 2 my post! i appreiciate it! 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Thankyou so much for your comments on my poems. I really appreciate it so much. I love all your poems. You are very talented and i'm adding you to my favourites!

Awe... i wish i could write like this... its wonderful.... wow... good job

sammie

This a great poem...one of the best. keep it up!:)
xxx

I love this poem.
Your writings are great.
5/5

This is an awesome piece, I can completely feel the emotion in it. Well done.