Poem For Lost Souls

by VioletRaven   Oct 31, 2005


Despair is the last emotion before death,
Life is the journey towards the dark,
Embrace the dark night and the silver stars,
Their cold comfort is the only truth.

If stars could weep, their diamond tears would cut your soul,
If the dark could speak, it would say: "give up hope",
If night could sing, it would lament the lost souls,
If moonlight could bring warmth to my cold heart I would be free.

The cold night is my only friend,
The winds embrace my only comfort,
The stars are all that guide me,
And hope is only a memory.

Silver snakes of sorrow twine around my heart,
Black vines of misery smother my mind,
My grief is a chain around my neck,
And isolation a dark cloak on my shoulders.

My soul burns with frozen flames,
Life slips through my fingers like silk,
My eyes are dry, I have no more tears to give,

I am alone, now and always.

*I was in a very strange emotional state when I wrote this, the imagery is a little repetitive but it's meant to be that way. I don't know if this is meant to be a poem or a song... judge for yourselves.*

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  • 2 years ago

    by Yapeo Ishull

    I don't think I'll ever forget this poem; thank you.

  • 17 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Just beautiful!! it was so captivating i was pulled in and brought to a world of beautiful despair!! so mysterious and fantastic
    5/5!!
    luv Fallen xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    What a fantastic poem. You truly have an understanding of how to make words beautiful. Although it may seem inappropriate, this poem is truly inspiring. I especially loved the line "If stars could weep, their diamond tears would cut your soul" fantastic imagery. loved it!!!

    xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    What an awesome poem,! I saw that you made a comment, a helpfull comment, so I decided to check your account out! I've read more of your writing and I don't think your decreasing at all sweetie!

    Keep up the good writing, I'll be back to check out more of your work!

    xx Ashley

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Great job... Keep it up.

    RLS

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