I like this poem alot you did good!

OMG that poem f u k i n roks!i love it 2 death!i love it so much coz u took the words out of my mouth and u read my heart!keep it up!keep shining!...josie....

Great job! i love it! it sounds a bit like a poem i wrote, its all about a starry night. it uses a lot of imagry about stars and such. it in a very different light tho. lol but anyways, this is a great poem! thanks for the comment on mine!
hannah

WOW!! this is amazing, i really love it. the imagery works really well:) i especially like the last 3 verses of the poem, very effective. thank you for your comment, its much appreciated. and by the way your quotes are really good too! take care:)xxx

I LOVED this poem, i realy liked the imagery it projects in your mind(wich btw, isnt repetitive) n i think its a really powerful poem. i really liked the last verse bcuz it seemd 2 hold the most emotion of the whole poem, even though some of the other lines are written in a way to provoke emotion, not sure if you meant to do that but you did anyway.

amazing poem.

good work, keep goin.

xXx

Excellent poem, i read it then i had to think twice, i feel this stuff every day and you have just written it all down in a way i couldn't, keep it up.
And by the way thanks for commenting on of my poems.
Crimson

Very interesting poem, i especially liked the ideas in the first stanza;
Despair is the last emotion before death,
Life is the journey towards the dark,
Embrace the dark night and the silver stars,
Their cold comfort is the only truth.

It made me want to carry on reading, very well done.
5/5

Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

Thank you all for your kind comments, I can't tell you how much it means to have someone read this, let alone want to comment on it. I luv ya all, and your poems too.
Thanks again,
*VioletRaven*

Omg that was so good
feeling like this creates wells in your soull that want to spill tears or even blood
I know the feeling and for you i hope that you find a way to make it go away
I shall continue to read your work
This poem felt so very real for me
and for many others i can guess
I loved it

Very good. It makes you think. You've got talent. Don't let yourself think otherwise. And thank you for your comment on my poem.

I think this poem was like a soem - a mix of poem n song...and a wonderfully dark one at that...as for my inspiration for Miswritten Fairytale in a way it was pure hatred and my own experiences tha inspired me yet in an other way it was from my 2 favorite books- "Dance With the Devil" by Sherrilyn Kenyon and "The Little Prince" by Antoine de Saint Exupéry...more of Sherrilyn's book because taht ones the dark one but its a beautiful story there- both are... i hope u check them out and if ud like check all of sherrilyn's i personally love them all...shes a romance novelist but she's beautiful and throughout in her work....anyway thanx for the comment and keep up the great work...

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A truly beautiful poem. I can't say anything else because no words can do this justice :) beautiful.

Sleeping Ugly

I really like all the words u chose. it makes it so beautiful and dark at the same time... its awesome!

This poem was beautiful, keep up the good work

This is truly one of the best poems I've read on this site..The images and metaphors are vivid and unique, and the emotion so full of despair and loss(I like the ambiguity-could be lost innocence, or a lost love, it is open in spots for the reader to be allowed to form their own meaning-very cool), it flows smoothly upon reading.But the images and emotion-utterly fantastic-I know I can relate and I think everyone can at some point to this feeling,state of mind/heart/soul.the end line is so brutally honest and has a great emotional impact(in fact to give it more punch I would suggest keeping the comma after"no more tears to give," then space and have the last line standing alone, a one line stanza, it would really make it reach out and grab one.Just a suggestion).Every stanza is so strongly constructed.The use of language superb, unusual combinations, and the emotions-lonely and wistful, melancholy and futile, sad and beautiful.I like it more every time I read it.Excellent piece, sincerely.

I love the creativity in this. although i am christian and i have my beliefs. i can see the point from which you come from and the state of being this is in. i love the understanding and relationship you show in this poem between yourself and nature. i find great pleasure in reading these types of poems its like reading something someone wrote a million years ago when there was nothing but nature to rely on. yes i know i wrote forever but your poem was jus amazing

I liked it. Thanks for the comment Please read my Color Blind?

O my word, this poem is so breathtaking! its absoloutely amazin, made me cry. loved it so much, all the emotion behind it that put the feelings i also feel into a wonderful context.
am defo goin to add u to my favourites! :)
be safe
xx

Poem and song. Rules either way.

Lv A, x

This is a truly outstanding peice. the imergry and metaphors are amazing and the emotions so very strong. it is truly brilliant.

5/5