Wow That is so good!!! i luv it!!
~Michelle~

This poem is woohoo! I loved it is so amazing. It has perfect everything, perfect style, perfect format, perfect length and perfect perfect. This was such a great read, of course I just had to read it again and again, I really loved it.
Please keep up the good work.

That was amazing, the imagery was beautiful, and really original way of writing about that too! 5/5 and deserves better!
Luv Helen xxx

Good job 5/5

I loved it and wish i wrote it nice job and btw one of these days when i have my own book am stealing this from u lol 5/5

Well obviously strange emotional states are very inspiring because this poem was incredible! The discriptions were crazy and I was . . . wow . . . I really really love this poem hunni and am in awe. Great job. Amazing job! *still in awe*

-Tainted Mikochan

Personally i think it could be a poem and a song! But I really loved the way you write keep it up! ^_^

Great job... Keep it up.

RLS

What an awesome poem,! I saw that you made a comment, a helpfull comment, so I decided to check your account out! I've read more of your writing and I don't think your decreasing at all sweetie!

Keep up the good writing, I'll be back to check out more of your work!

xx Ashley

What a fantastic poem. You truly have an understanding of how to make words beautiful. Although it may seem inappropriate, this poem is truly inspiring. I especially loved the line "If stars could weep, their diamond tears would cut your soul" fantastic imagery. loved it!!!

xXx

Just beautiful!! it was so captivating i was pulled in and brought to a world of beautiful despair!! so mysterious and fantastic
5/5!!
luv Fallen xoxo

I don't think I'll ever forget this poem; thank you.