That was very sad...but it was a good poem. keep writing and thank you for the comments.
good luck

Breanna

Hey that poem is sad but really well written, if you want someone to talk to im here for you.

sarah

Good poem! It held a lot of emotion. I'm sorry that your life is like this. You can email me if you ever need someone to talk to!

This was sad.. and i hope that you dont feel that way anymore.. remember, there are always people there for you.. okay.. i really think that you should pay attention to capitalizing the start of lines.. that is just the way you should write..

i wish, just wished i was loved
^ should be "wish" not "wished"

by someone who cares
^ should be "cared"

i wish that they'd 4give and 4get it
^ should be "forgive" and "forget" dont use internet slang in the sad poem section..if you want to write like that, put it in the appropriate section..

good job though.. 4/5