by Lily Oct 31, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
new love
So many words that one isn't capable of choosing the right ones to use to express what is being felt. Only those words spoken of from my knight, can give me the chills, only those looks he flashes at me can make my heart swell, only his touch can make me quiver then melt. I reminisce of those glorious words spoken to i, his gift from heaven above, i his savior. A single caress from his long shapely hands can fill the place in my heart that seemed far too cold for far too long. A single kiss form his sweet lips placed on mine can make the thought dissappear and the head spin then somehow i am no longer in control my knight is. |
by Gary
That's quite the sensuous piece of work there. |
by Passionate
Hey pretty good, the endings missing something but the thoughts are understandable. thanx for the comment on my poem! ill read some more later! 4/5 |
by HJ
A great little poem. Diction and flow flawless. Very thought provoking with much visionary passion. |