A great little poem. Diction and flow flawless. Very thought provoking with much visionary passion.

Sometimes its the hardest thing to write from the heart but you handle it beautifully.

Thank you so much for your kind words on my "Rivers of the Heart" Please check out my latest work "Love and War" Let me know what you think.

I look forward to reading more from you, keep it up you have talent.

Many kisses
Hayley

Hey pretty good, the endings missing something but the thoughts are understandable. thanx for the comment on my poem! ill read some more later! 4/5

That's quite the sensuous piece of work there.