Family

by Bug1219   Oct 31, 2005


Family are people who love you
and cares about you
they are there for you no matter what. family.

they help you with your
problems they are always there to talk to to play games with when you
have a nightmare they'd say it'll be okay.

i love my family
and i know they love me
i know that they'll love me no matter what even with the mistakes i have made

families are people that love you
you love them
no matter how many times you say
I HATE YOU!!!
that is family

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Again, i will say "work on your flow" and again i will say "you cannot just end the line whenever you feel like it!" it is actually quite sad.. because these poems feelings and thoughts are pretty good, but they are being ruined by a bad flow..

    and cares about you
    ^ should be "care"

    nice job though, but i am serious about trying to fix the flow.. 3/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    This was good but there was some grammar mistakes, they kind of distract from the poem. The overall poem I though was good though.

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