Wow... i really liked this..
It's very different but still really well written.
There's a good flow to it and your choice of words make it even better.
Definately 5/5

xxx cici xxx

This was unique Fighter, I loved it keep it up *HUGS*

Jenn

Kool idea it sort of plays on claustrophobia (i mite have spelt that wrong) 5/5 xox

That's a very unique idea for a poem, I don't think I've seen anyone else write a piece about a phobia. It was ver well executed and gave the reader a sense of anxiety. You accomplished what you set out to do extremely well in the write.

Warmest regards,

Steve