WOW... this is really well written! :) 5/5

Hum, the end, was that "bear" or "bare" that you meant. Either way, that was strong. I liked it... especially the part about dancing, as sometimes I feel like moving to a song inside my head, too!
Yes, well, that's what three years of dancing does to you, at the end you can't stop.
I also liked the lines Through her untold smile, because that was a very ingenius way of saying that she didn't smile.

//T.L.//

Great job it almost sounds as if you are describing yourself in a subconsious way... you have a great word choice

keep it up

Bri

Wow this is very gracefull seemed like the words just flowed...if u know what i mean....

WOW I dont know what to say! well done, amazing poem!
i really like the last 4 lines, great finish
love mel

Please, you really are beginning to scare me. you write like i've never known someone to write before. i'm becoming obsessed with finding more of your poems to read. i simply cannot believe what my mind is telling me. is it real?

lis'