-jaw drops- wow THIS IS AMAZING, wow I felt like i was reading shakespear or something this is just wow, I can so relate and veryy verryyy expressive wow amazing my dear you have talent dont you ever forget, lubb youuu

Beautiful. All your poems seem to speak magick.

I really like it, the colours and images were so clear in my head when I read it, and that is definitely a good thing. Great write, Keep it up.
*VioletRaven*

Oh my, this was excellent. The flow was flawless, the rhyming was great...the story was so sweet and it was all organized into perfection. I loved it. Very good job, definitely one of my favorites so far. Great job! It was very descriptive and it had everything it needed! Once again, I loved it! Amazing, really. Take care.

~britt