My Pain

by Fallengod667   Oct 31, 2005


My bodies broke,
my soul is burned,
my mind is gone,
completely turned,

I find the strength,
to live today,
as dawn draws near,
i can only pray.

Release me from,
this endless guilt,
release me from,
this pain i felt.

Release me now,
oh, please let go,
that god my take,
my empty soul.

i block the pain,
the best i can,
i lose my strength,
it starts again.

i start to lose,
my sanity,
from pain i know,
will always be,

Tomorrow brings,
another day,
and still the pain,
wont go away.

i can only wait,
until the day,
that death relieves me,
of my pain

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really liked this poem. I can relate to what you are saying. I love the imagery and the style is very effective for the topic. Keep it up. Nik

  • 17 years ago

    by xLaurax

    That's really beautiful! It kinda reminds me of a few of my friends. Great job!

    -Aera-

  • 18 years ago

    by Nyx

    Now that is a poem!good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Naerwen

    I to just live in waiting for death to release me of my pain. an amazing read, another favourite of mine. well done

    Naerwen The Chosen Bride of White Rabbit

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Nice work. I love the first stanza, but I aslo like the way you've said:
    "I find the strength,
    to live today," very inspiring, thank you.
    5/5
    *VioletRaven*

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